I’m sitting here, reading every word, savoring every word.
I like it. A lot. Refine it if you want to, it’s your work and all, but I like it the way it is. Maybe I like your natural style. Maybe that’s why I still hang around here, reading and commenting as I’m apt to do.
But know, and know this in your heart of hearts, that at least one person likes what you write in it’s pure and unadulterated form.
Sometimes the first draft is the purest… its not always the most technically supurb, but its more real than the rewritten version… and in your case, this is an excellent rough draft.
You make me embarassed to post more of my crappy NaNoWriMo experiment.
keith
10.Nov.03 at 11:19 am
jodi makes it sound like joots and i are writing superheroes, swooping in to save her from some self-imagined imminent story danger.
hardly necessary.
but if it makes jodi feel better, i’m willing to slip into a pair of longjohns and a cape and dish out writing advice. joots! are you with me?
jodi
10.Nov.03 at 11:25 am
oh i forgot, my new friend richard has helped too.
i’m just handing out the props where they deserve to go mr. orekeith.
ultimately i am the one to blame for wonderfulness and/or crapacity of the story. though i will blame you for it being crappy if you want.
I’m sitting here, reading every word, savoring every word.
I like it. A lot. Refine it if you want to, it’s your work and all, but I like it the way it is. Maybe I like your natural style. Maybe that’s why I still hang around here, reading and commenting as I’m apt to do.
But know, and know this in your heart of hearts, that at least one person likes what you write in it’s pure and unadulterated form.
Gotta second Thomas on that.
Sometimes the first draft is the purest… its not always the most technically supurb, but its more real than the rewritten version… and in your case, this is an excellent rough draft.
You make me embarassed to post more of my crappy NaNoWriMo experiment.
jodi makes it sound like joots and i are writing superheroes, swooping in to save her from some self-imagined imminent story danger.
hardly necessary.
but if it makes jodi feel better, i’m willing to slip into a pair of longjohns and a cape and dish out writing advice. joots! are you with me?
oh i forgot, my new friend richard has helped too.
i’m just handing out the props where they deserve to go mr. orekeith.
ultimately i am the one to blame for wonderfulness and/or crapacity of the story. though i will blame you for it being crappy if you want.
it’s good, jodi. it’s really good. it just flows so naturally.
hey! i didn’t really want any blame or praise. i was just trying to justify sitting around my apartment in longjohns and a cape.
that needs no justification.
sometimes when i wear a red shiny bra and blue shiny underpants, i think i look like a superpornhero.
just though i’d share.
do underoos count? and can i be batman?
*nanananananananaBATMAN!!!!!!*
joots can be Batman, but please, please don’t ask me to be Robin. i’m just getting too damn old to be anyone’s boy wonder!