letting the baby go

i’ve let about five people read my rough, rough, rough short story draft. the thought of letting people read it makes me a little sick to my stomach.

so far, the reviews are good. i’ve had a few suggestions, but my friends are being really positive.

it makes me giddy!

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9 Comments

  1. heather 05.Aug.03 at 10:14 am

    yes. it is very good. i can’t wait to read the finished ending. it was like sex without the orgasm, you tease! 😉

  2. dainec 05.Aug.03 at 10:40 am

    I’m jealous! I would love to read it. 🙂

  3. Jeff 05.Aug.03 at 1:02 pm

    Sex without the orgasm? This concept is foreign to me. It’s like saying the alphabet, but without letters… I didn’t know it was even possible.

  4. jodi 05.Aug.03 at 1:03 pm

    that’s because you are a man.

  5. Bonny 05.Aug.03 at 1:25 pm

    Jeff! HAhahahahahaha! Sheesh.

  6. Thomas 05.Aug.03 at 3:01 pm

    The concept is tantric, really; The orgasm ends intercourse therefore you simply suppress it and let those pre-orgasmic energies flow through your body. Then, when the time is appropriate (after a number of hours or so) you can release those energies in pure bliss all at once, or over a period of hours. You can even release those energies long after the actual act has been consumated.

    Personally though, I think there’s still a place for headboard banging, obscenity spewing, sheet ripping, carnal, basic sex.

  7. AC 05.Aug.03 at 3:39 pm

    > that’s because you are a man.
    >
    hey now! not all us men think that way!

  8. Jeff 05.Aug.03 at 8:57 pm

    Um, yeah, anyway…
    What Thomas meant to say was:
    Ya’ll are responsible for your own orgasm.

  9. Thomas 06.Aug.03 at 7:01 am

    It’s a man’s privilege to bring his partner to orgasm; It’s neither a duty nor a chore.

    Personally, during intercourse, I like a 10 count cycle; You start with 10 deep strokes, then 9 deep strokes and 1 shallow stroke, 8 deep strokes and 2 shallow, 7 long and 3 shallow, 6 and 4, 5 and 5, etc…

    Speed the rythmn of the strokes as you advance the number of shallow strokes. After you reach 10 shallow, reverse the count and incorporate deeper strokes slowing the rythmn accordingly. I find I’m usually to wrapped in the blissful sensations themselves that my own orgasm is put on hold until I hear and feel my partner’s own release. Her orgasm usually triggers mine, making the release a shared experience.

    Try it with your spouse, significant other, mistress, or the person of your choice.