My first screenplay

Music Geeks, the Argument: A Play in One Act by Jodichromeysupergenius

INT. DARK BAR — NIGHT

A group of eight people, five men, three women sit on plastic chairs in a secluded area of a divey kind of bar. They are seated around two formica tables that have been pushed together. One row of people sit with their backs to the windows of the bar. The windows look out over a not really busy street of a midwestern city.

There are five different conversations going on around the table. Each person seems to be engaged in talking with the person directly across from them.

The jukebox blares Cheap Trick’s “Surrender” so everyone at the table seems to be shouting.

VODO a sparse hipster-looking guy with geek glasses sits across from JODI an abundant nerdy-looking girl in an orange sweater.

VODO

He’s so fucking contrived. I saw him once and he had all these people on stage and they had choreographed hand gestures.

Vodo gestures like he’s interpretive dancing with only his hands.

JODI

Sure it’s contrived, but you can be contrived and still be good. I don’t see how you can like Andrew Bird and not like Sufjan Stevens.

VODO

They aren’t the same.

JODI

They aren’t, but they are similar.

VODO

You know who I really like? TV on the Radio

JODI
(incredulous)

Really?

VODO

Yeah, they’re amazing.

JODI
(skeptically)

Really?

VODO

Yes, “Return to Cookie Mountain” is better than the new Hold Steady album

JODI
(astonished)

Really?

VODO

You don’t like it?

JODI

I haven’t really given it much of a chance, it just doesn’t. . .

VODO

It’s too weird for you.

JODI

No

VODO

It’s not indie rock, it’s like R&B but. . .

JODI

TV on the Radio?

VODO

Listen you like Hall & Oats, right?

JODI

Yes but that has nothing to do with their goodness or badness.

VODO

How do you feel about Ryan Adams

JODI

I like him but kind of stopped paying attention when he started releasing a record a month.

VODO

See?

JODI

Come on, I know he’s trying to be Paul Westerberg but he’s got some decent songs.

Vodo sits back, crosses his arms and smirks.

JODI

“Come Pick Me Up” is a wonderful song.

Vodo shakes his head.

JODI

And the Whiskeytown stuff is phenomenal

VODO

They’re just so derivative

JODI

Oh fuck you

VODO

They are.

JODI

Fuck off

VODO

Do you even know what derivative means?

Jodi gives Vodo the finger

THE END

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6 Comments

  1. danielle 06.Apr.07 at 10:38 pm

    I checked out TV on the Radio when I got home cuz I hate not knowing what people are talking about. Wow. Gotta go with Vodo on this one. They’re great. At least the 2 songs I listened to-Wolf Like Me and Province.

  2. Jodi 06.Apr.07 at 10:42 pm

    Hmm, I might have to rewrite my screenplay to include a part for a mysterious TRAITOR!

  3. kelly 06.Apr.07 at 10:43 pm

    I would like to point out that the author acknowledges in this screen play that Jodi does in fact both tell Vodo to fuck off AND gives him the finger.

    Just saying.

  4. Jodi 06.Apr.07 at 10:44 pm

    And yet, you were the bad student he was ripping on last night. HA!

  5. kelly 06.Apr.07 at 10:48 pm

    So this is going to be a long term thing…okay, but don’t make me pull out the big guns.

    (Note: I don’t know exactly what those are, but I’m sure I’ll come up with something.)

  6. Jodi 06.Apr.07 at 10:49 pm

    I am sure it’ll be a ‘thing’ until next week when I get sent back to the bad-student corner and you’re back to being the pet.