Comments on: I wrote a poem about fairytales and rainbows https://iwilldare.com/2007/08/i-wrote-a-poem-about-fairytales-and-rainbows/ A little bit of heaven & A whole lot of hell Tue, 07 Aug 2007 01:16:11 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.1 By: phil https://iwilldare.com/2007/08/i-wrote-a-poem-about-fairytales-and-rainbows/#comment-17401 Tue, 07 Aug 2007 01:16:11 +0000 https://iwilldare.com/2007/08/06/i-wrote-a-poem-about-fairytales-and-rainbows/#comment-17401 damn…you might need to get some.maybe just go get drunk and have a one nighter

]]> By: Heather https://iwilldare.com/2007/08/i-wrote-a-poem-about-fairytales-and-rainbows/#comment-17400 Mon, 06 Aug 2007 21:56:33 +0000 https://iwilldare.com/2007/08/06/i-wrote-a-poem-about-fairytales-and-rainbows/#comment-17400 It’s not so much that the poem itself is shitty, but it’s the fact that you’re used to writing with great detail, so too much tries to work its way into the poem. Don’t feel too bad, I’ve read much much worse, and the sad part is, the stupid girl doesn’t realize that she writes shitty poetry.

And “bullet” is a tough word to put in a poem, I will agree with that.

]]> By: UH https://iwilldare.com/2007/08/i-wrote-a-poem-about-fairytales-and-rainbows/#comment-17394 Mon, 06 Aug 2007 17:17:41 +0000 https://iwilldare.com/2007/08/06/i-wrote-a-poem-about-fairytales-and-rainbows/#comment-17394 “Bullet” is a tough word to have in a poem. It’s very abrupt when spoken, and it carries a lot of emotional baggage with it. With the other words, it’s almost like a Sesame Street “one of these things is not like the other” sketch.

]]> By: Jodi https://iwilldare.com/2007/08/i-wrote-a-poem-about-fairytales-and-rainbows/#comment-17393 Mon, 06 Aug 2007 16:17:08 +0000 https://iwilldare.com/2007/08/06/i-wrote-a-poem-about-fairytales-and-rainbows/#comment-17393 Nope. I am all about the honesty.

]]> By: shokkou https://iwilldare.com/2007/08/i-wrote-a-poem-about-fairytales-and-rainbows/#comment-17392 Mon, 06 Aug 2007 16:15:22 +0000 https://iwilldare.com/2007/08/06/i-wrote-a-poem-about-fairytales-and-rainbows/#comment-17392 I thought maybe you were just being too hard on yourself. My bad. :oD

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