Comments on: salinger on the toilet duck incident https://iwilldare.com/2006/02/salinger-on-the-toilet-duck-incident/ A little bit of heaven & A whole lot of hell Fri, 10 Feb 2006 16:51:18 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.1 By: kelly https://iwilldare.com/2006/02/salinger-on-the-toilet-duck-incident/#comment-12202 Fri, 10 Feb 2006 16:51:18 +0000 https://iwilldare.com/?p=5192#comment-12202 I like that line.

]]> By: jodi https://iwilldare.com/2006/02/salinger-on-the-toilet-duck-incident/#comment-12201 Fri, 10 Feb 2006 15:47:49 +0000 https://iwilldare.com/?p=5192#comment-12201 vodo on “The Toilet Duck Incident:”
–The dinner scene with Bob isn’t really working for me. What’s the story here? The conflict? I

It feels a little light, a little silly, e.g. “my lungs let loose with a series of barks that brought the waiter running to our table with a pitcher of water.” Did she really bark? Did the waiter actually run? It’s a little cartoony, you know?

I don’t know . . .I just don’t think this story is really about the “Toilet Duck Incident.” Ultimately, it’s about something much bigger than that.

]]> By: kelly the bitter https://iwilldare.com/2006/02/salinger-on-the-toilet-duck-incident/#comment-12200 Fri, 10 Feb 2006 15:41:42 +0000 https://iwilldare.com/?p=5192#comment-12200 salinger on “To The River”:

“unclear” written above “needing a drink.”

And…

Oh, wait. That would be all.

Fucking asshole.

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